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Clock William

November 30th, 2008 |

Author: Baby Nursery Staff

Clock William
Is this wedding invitation worded correctly?

Mr. and Mrs. Bill Wade request your presence in honoring the marriages of their daughters.

Please join us for an informal reception to celebrate the union of:

Robert William Smith and Violet Ann Wade
who wed on December 18, 2008

David Thomas Jones and Valerie Layne Wade
who wed on May 23, 2009

Saturday, the third of October
Two thousand and nine
at three o’clock in the afternoon

At the home of Bill and Elayne Wade
123 County Highway 12
Upstate, NY 12345

Please respond before 09•26•2009
Reply to Bill & Elayne at 555.555.7189

Hi. It's OK as is....but I would change the first two lines (my suggestion below), AND...instead of using the word "wed" use "who were married". AND, since your parents are hosting....the "brides" name should be FIRST!

Mr. and Mrs. Bill Wade request your presence at an informal reception to celebrate the marriages of their daughters.

Violet Ann Wade and Robert William Smith
who were married on December 18, 2008

Valerie Layne Wade and David Thomas Jones
who were married on May 23, 2009

The celebration will be Saturday, the third of October
Two thousand and nine
at three o’clock in the afternoon

At the home of Bill and Elayne Wade
123 County Highway 12
Upstate, NY 12345

Please respond before 09•26•2009
Reply to Bill & Elayne at 555.555.7189